This is a story of a young girl who experiences things no child should ever experience. Lizzie tries and tries to get the attention of her mother to get it to stop, to get her to help. She is also left with the duty of protecting her sister, Rose from the monster. A man who makes both girls shiver when he comes to babysit them. If only the one person who SHOULD be there to listen, WOULD just be there for them. If only her mother would listen, just once…
In some ways, I'm glad I read it. Because I was able to do it, and I felt like I had gotten through a line I've been afraid of crossing for a while. In others, I wish stories like this didn't exist. But then, I wish this entire situation wasn't a real thing
All and all, I felt like it could have used a bit more work. It was a good story (in a manner of speaking), but it had some grammar/content issues.
The most important thing I got out of this story was the end. What happens after the fact. It was realistic, similar to my own experience. Helped me feel like I wasn't some freak.